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I've chosen the photo number one. In the centre of the photo you can see my full, happy and joyful family. We have a tradition to spend winter holidays abroad. Last year when we were abroad the weather was frosty and we were warmly dressed. We skated snowboard, sledge and made snowballs. At that moment I took this photo. After having some rest we came home. I keep this photo in my album because it remembers me about that happy time.

уровень то какой нужен?
так то это шлак, надёрганы какие то слова из словаря и не всегда к месту,
видно отсутствие знания английской лексики помимо нехватки словарного запаса
тут надо практически всё заново переписывать, чтобы это было английским

I've chosen photo number one. In the centre of the photo, you can see my fully assembled happy and joyful family. We have a tradition to spend winter holidays abroad. Last year when we were abroad the weather was frosty and we were warmly dressed. We skated snowboard, sledge and made snowballs. At this moment I took this photo. After relaxing we were going to come back home. I keep this photo in my album because it reminds me of the good holiday we had there.

По-моему, очень даже неплохо получилось!