кто поможет исправить ошибке в тексте ( английский). Текст не больщой

Traditional or cooperative learning?

Traditional school or cooperative learning. Which is the best?
I think the cooperative learning is the best. You ask why? Because the coperative
learning is more useful and easy. I can give some examples. First example is
about the atmosphere in a classroom. In traditional schools the discipline is one
of the most important things. While the atmosphere in the cooperative learning is friengly.
It makes the teaching more interesting and useful. What else? In the traditional school
the most important method is learning, while the cooperative learning uses the colloquial
method. It helps to study the language sooner.
Now, unfortunately many schools use traditional methods, but i hope that they will
change the way of teaching and make the educatuional process more interesting
and effective.

Я бы заменил "cooperative learning" на "group study"

Traditional or coperative learning?
Traditional school or coperative learning. Which is best?
I think coperative is theBEST . DO You ask why?Because coperative learning is more useful and easy. I can give some examples. First example is about atmosphere in classroom. In traditional schools discipline is one of the most important rules.ЭТО ПРЕДЛОЖЕНИЕ МНЕ ВООБЩЕ НЕ ЯСНО. It makes teaching more interesting and useful. What else? In traditional school most important method is learning, wild in coperatice learning uses speaking method. It helps to teach the language more quickly.
Now, unfortunately many schools uses traditionals methods, but i hope that they will change teaching and will make its more interesting and effective.

да вам и в русском ошибки исправлять и исправлять) ) может вам сначала русский подучить, а потом уже за английский браться!!!