Вопрос для тех кто действительно знает англ.яз. а не переводит через всякие программы!помогите перевести!текст смотрит

When you'll reach your holiday destination, try to avoid being directly under the sun.
When we will be starring in a TV-show, we will be discussing ecological problems (or our discussion will revolve around ecological issues).
When the environment improves, animals would return to their natural habitats.
You will learn about rare and endangered animals after reading this book.
Little Peter will be able to see different kinds of mammals, birds, reptiles, and insects when he goes to the zoo with his mother.

When you go to the south try not to stay in the direct sun long. When we take part in the TV show we'ii be discussing ecological problems for a long time. When ecology grows better animals will return to their natural habitats. You'll get to know about rare and disappearing species when you have read this book. Little Peter will be able to see various mammals, birds, reptiles and insects when he goes with his mother to the Zoo.
Сделала только потому, что просьба правильно аргументирована - никакой он лай переводчик Е разбирается в англ. временах глагола. Но следовало бы русский текст тоже ГРАМОТНО написать (раз уж требоваия выставлять!)

When you will go on the south, try to not be under direct beams of the sun for a long time. When we wil be participating in a TV-show, we will discuss ecological issues for a long time. When the ecology becomes better, animals will return to places of the dwelling. You wil find out about rare and disappearing kinds of animals when you will read this book. Little Peter will see various kinds of mammal, birds, reptiles and insects when he with mum will go to a zoo.