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Im intelliget,generous and determined. My head rules my heart. I like to dominate people. I have a confident and attractive personality. Im quiet and I dont like crowds. I love to travel much. It is interesting for me to see new people and new places. Im tolerant and a good listener,so friends often turn to me. I can keep secrets. Sometimes I can be moody,but I always kind to people I like. I like practical and realistic people who have a strong sence of humour and often have friends in stiches, It is easy to deal with sociable and amusing persons. I appreciate honest and kind-hearted people. i admire wise and hard-working persons. i hate pretence and deception. All sugar and honey. I dont like sensitive people who take something to heart. It is difficult to get along with people who lose temper very easily,aggressive,cruel and dull. All people are different,but it`s my mind.
Иван Петраков
Иван Петраков
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I'm intelligent, generous and decisive. My head is ruled by my heart. I like to dominate people. I have a confident and attractive personality. I'm quiet and I don't like crowds. I like to travel. (I travel a lot.) It is interesting for me to meet new people and visit new places. I'm tolerant and a good listener, so friends often turn to me. I can keep secrets. Sometimes I can be moody, but I always kind to people I like. I like practical and realistic people who have a strong sence of humour and often have friends in stiches. It is easy to deal with sociable and amusing people. I appreciate honest and open-hearted people. I admire wise and hard-working people. i hate pretence and deception. All sugar and honey. I don't like sensitive people who take something too close to heart. It is difficult to get along with people who lose temper easily, who are aggressive, cruel and dull. All people are different, but that's how I think.
Ххх Просто
Ххх Просто
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I AM kind to people и that's WHAT I think.
Юрий Винник
Юрий Винник
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я вас уже боюсь) I like to dominate people и при этом quiet and I dont like crowds)) и как получается?
Иван Петраков а что это вы всё время мои вопросы комментируете))) лучше б делом помогли!!! =))