Английский!кому не сложно прверте и исправте ошибки)

I don't read MUCH. I prefer to watch films and american series. But all the same/YET I have A favourite book (A BOOK I LIKE MOST). It is "Metro 2033". IT IS A STORY ABOUT a nuclear accident/DISASER in Moscow. People HAVE TO live in the underground, because they can't live on the surface. The accident has grave consequences, A LOT OF MUTANTS APPEAR in the city. At the end of the story people (HUMANS?) destroy theIR den. But (people did not realize that?) mutants were FRIENDLY and wanted to help the people.

I don't read a lot. I prefer WATCHING films and american series. But STILL THERE IS A favourite book OF MINE. It is "Metro 2033". The matter is a nuclear DISASTER in Moscow. People live in the underground, because they can't live on the surface. The accident has grave consequences, THERE LIVE A LOT OF MUTANTS IN THE CITY. At the end of the story people have destroyed the den of the enemy. But XXfortunately, the mutants were kind and wanted to help the people.

I don't read a lot. I prefer WATCHING films and american series. But STILL I have my favourite book. It is "Metro 2033". The matter is a nuclear DISASTER in Moscow. The people live in the underground, because they can't live on the surface. The accident has grave consequences, THERE LIVE MANY MUTANTS IN THE CITY. At the end of the story the people have destroyed the den of the enemy. But unfortunately (????) the mutants were kind and wanted to help the people.

Так. Это просто перевод с русского, да, к тому же, я не поняла, почему "к сожалению"??? Люди не поняли, что мутанты хотят установить с ними контакт. Те не помочь хотели, а контакт установить!!!!

I don't read a lot. I prefer to watch films and american SOAP-OPERAS(SERIALS). But STILL I have my favourite book. It is "Metro 2033". TIS STORY IS ABOUT a nuclear accident in Moscow. The people live in the underground, because they can't live on the surface. The accident has grave consequences,AND AS A RESULT THERE ARE many mutants in the city. At the end of the story the people have destroyed the den of the enemy. But unfortunately the mutants were kind and wanted to help the people.

По-моему в предложении The accident has grave consequences, лучше вместо has лучше употребить had.