Лингвистика

Английский язык. Рассказ о себе.

Здравствуйте!
Мне надо составить небольшой рассказ о себе.
Я на самом примитивным уровне составил, проверьте, пожалуйста.

Hello. My name is Alexey. I am from Russia. I live in Volgograd. I am 18 years old. I study in the Chemistry University.
I don`t married. I live with parents. My mother name Galina. Her is 50 years old. She is housewife. My father name Valeryi. His is 55 years old. He work a driver. I have got a pet. It is a cat. Its is name Tayson. It is 4 years old. We live in a flat. I like run in the evening. I have got many friends. I like go in a cinema.
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Lilas Lilas
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Hello. My name is Alexey. I am from Russia. I live in Volgograd. I am 18 years old. I study at the Chemistry University.
I am not married. I live with my parents. My mother's name is Galina. She is 50 years old. She is a housewife. My father's name is Valeryi. He is 55 years old. He work as a driver. I have a pet. It is a cat. His name is Tayson. He is 4 years old. We live in a flat. I like to jog in the evenings. I have many friends. I like to go to a cinema.
Maksim Nizovcev
Maksim Nizovcev
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Лучший ответ
Lilas Lilas Подскажите, зачем нужно "as" в предложении - He work as a driver ? Нельзя сказать без него?
А разве можно обращаться к животным как к лицам м.р. ? His name is Tayson. He is 4 years old.
Вместо "I am not married" лучше поставь "I am single". Остальное грамматически ОК, но действительно как-то примитивно.
Lilas Lilas Спасибо, это мой первый рассказ о себе:-)
Hello. My name is Alexey. I am from Russia. I live in Volgograd. I am 18 years old. I study in the Chemistry University.
I amn`t married. I live with parents. My mother`s name is Galina. She is 50 years old. She is a housewife. My father`s name is Valeryi. He is 55 years old. He works as a driver. I have got a pet. It is a cat. Its name is Tayson. It is 4 years old. We live in a flat. I like runing in the evening. I have got many friends. I like going to the cinema.
Hello. My name is Alexey. I am from Russia. I live in Volgograd. I am 18 years old. I study at the Chemistry University.
I 'm single. I live with parents. My mother's name is Galina. She is 50 years old. She is a housewife. My father's name is Valeryi. Hi is 55 years old. He works as a driver. I have a pet. It is a cat. (почему просто не сказать "I have a cat"? зачем тратить на это 2 предложения) Its name is Tayson. It is 4 years old. We live in a flat. I like runing in the evening. I have many friends. I like to go to the cinema.
где хелло, нужен восклицательный знак. Предложения побольше, а то какие-то открывки.
~*~Сая~*~ *********
~*~Сая~*~ *********
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Всё, как у caterine caterine, только я бы сказала I like jogging in the evening.