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Задали текст по английскому языку про фестиваль, я составил, но боюсь ошибок будет слишком много. Помогите исправить:)

I want to talk about the traditional
festival which takes place in Irkutsk.
This festival is
Baikal motor show. It is held from 6 to 7 September each year. It
is takes place in Irkutsk at the stadium Trud. Baikal Motor
Show is not only a demonstration of autotuning, but also an
interesting show. This year, the participants will
present 25 support groups. You can cast a vote to participant. Total
prize fund is $ 30,000.
I think it's a very
cool show and I want to get on Baikal motor show with my
friends.
dslobachev
dslobachev
698
I want to talk about the traditional festival which takes place in Irkutsk. This festival is Baikal motorshow. It is two-day festival running from 6th to 7th of September each year. It takes place in Irkutsk at the Trud stadium. Baikal Motor Show is more than just car tuning exposition, it's really amazing show. This year, the participants will present 25 support groups. You can cast a vote for the participants. Total prize fund is $30,000. I think it's very cool show and I want to go to Baikal motor show with my friends.

перед прилагательными артикль не ставится. лучше сначала писать название, а уже потом указывать, что это такое "Труд стадион", вместо auto лучше использовать car.

извиняюсь за возможные недочеты, чужой код - темный лес =)
Wojtek Klimzynski
Wojtek Klimzynski
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I want to talk about traditionalfestival which takes place in Irkutsk.This festival isBaikal motor show. It is held from 6 to 7 of September annual. It takes place in Irkutsk at the stadium "Trud". Baikal MotorShow is not only a demonstration of autotuning, but also aninteresting show. This year, the participants willpresent 25 support groups. You can cast a vote to participant. Totalprize fund is $ 30,000.I think it's a verycool show and I want to get on Baikal motor show with myfriends.
Диана Ли
Диана Ли
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I want to talk about a traditional festival, which takes place in Irkutsk.
This festival is called Baikal Motor Show. It is held from 6th to 7th of September each year. It takes place in Irkutsk at Trud Stadium. The Baikal Motor Show is not only a demonstration of car tuning, but also an interesting show. This year, the participants will present 25 support groups. You can vote for your favorite contestant. The total prize fund is $30,000.
I think it is a very cool show and I want to visit the Baikal Motor Show with my friends.