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Первая:
Whole our life is closely related to communication with other people. Our society has become like this only because of the ability to communicate with each other. Otherwise we would be no different from animals. We communicate at work, on the street, at home, we send emails, SMS and so on. Moreover we communicate even when we are silent! We talk to ourselves, because we always need expert advice!) With communication we can get anything, there is no man who cannot be persuaded to do what you need, you only need to learn one science - social engineering. But we are not talking about it.

Many people have difficulties with communication. Someone dont want to look stupid, someone is afraid that he will misunderstand, and someone just shy. The reasons can be a lot and if you don't want to live your life on the sidelines you need to fight them! The first thing you need to understand that you have to communicate anyway! Even if you're Einstein, if you'll be silent, no one will know about it!

Put yourself in an uncomfortable situation, speak to a large group of people, don't be afraid to look silly, but fear to not be heard! Select the main idea, highlight it in your speech. Be positive and confident not only in your speech, but also in facial expressions. Remember that enthusiasm is contagious! But don't forget to listen, and most importantly to hear other people!
Вторая:
I finished College in Pavlovsk when my friend Alex came back from the army. We were classmates and I know him all my life. He was a good guy,he was intelligent and Executive, He did well in school and had his dreams and goals. After spending some time at home, he quickly found the girl and they began to live together. Some time later, his girlfriend got pregnant. He had to get married and forget about his future. Maybe it's a bad example of inspiration, but it taught me to think about my future. After this situation I entered the University and went to Voronezh, and was very happy about that. After half a year after the wedding Alex got divorced. I studied, and he worked as a loader. This situation deprived him of a normal future. This example inspired me to think about future and not live one day.
Третья:
I recommend to choose the storage room instead of the office. There is already almost everything you need, and its cheaper to renovate. The majority wants a separate room and it should be done. It is small, but on the other hand, they can go there by several people, and the office will be working always! It is convenient for the fact that the Manager will be unable to hear them. As for those who want espresso machine and cooler, you can buy them, but later, after the work plan will be exceeded.) The cooler can be placed in the office and those who need natural light can stand and drink right in the office at the window or in the workplace. In this way all will be satisfied, and we will save money as well as the manager wanted.

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