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The Wordl wide web is the vastest danger of our time.

Nowadays the Internet is supposed to know only as a hazard of 21th century.Some people state that the net brings to society only harm, while others hold an opposite view.

In my opinion, being online is not awful as many believe.Firstly, it assists to parents to definite where their children are.Secondly, one can effortlessly find the information, which he or she wants.Thirdly,whenever your relatives are it will not be a problem to talk with them due to the Www.

However, others cannot be agree with above opinion.They claim that the Internet distracts students from their studying. Moreover, you do not know what your children do behind you.

As for me, I do not divide the opinion as these reasons can be easily broken.If student knows how to use the Www,it will become a great assistent.And parents should observe offspring's activity to be sure that they are not doing something dangerous.

All in all, I strongly belive that the net is not dangerous. One must know the safety's rules of using Wordl wide web .
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The Worldwide Web is the greatest danger of our time.

Nowadays the Internet is supposed to be THE hazard of THE 21th century (или is known/is believed to be). Some say that the net brings [only] harm to society, while others hold the opposite view.

In my opinion, being online is not AS awful as many believe. Firstly, it HELPS (у assist сложнее с управлением) parents to follow their children's whereabouts. Secondly, you can effortlessly find (the) information you want. Thirdly, wherever your friends and relatives are it will not be a problem to talk with them thanks to the WW.

However, others cannot agree with THE above opinion.They claim that the Internet distracts students from their studies. Besides, one will not know what their children do behind their back.

As for me, I do not SHARE THIS viewpoint/attitude as these arguments don't hold water. If A student knows how to use the WW, it may be of great assistance. And parents should USE OTHER MEANS AS WELL to observe THEIR offspring's activity to be sure that they are not doing something dangerous.

In conclusion, although there are different opinions on this problem, I still believe that the Word Web is not the (greatest) hazard of the 21th century (или a hazard in the 21st century)
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