Грамматика(английский язык)

Согласна с Mimi. Только 4) я бы сделал по-другому:
4) What are you reading now?- I'M readING Tom`s book. I am in a hurry. Tom will come SOON, and I WANT to finish reading the book before he comes.

Let`s go for a walk. The rain stopped and the sun shoune. - The rain HAS STOPPED and the sun IS SHINING.
2) If you will help me, I will do this work well. - If you HELP me, ..
3) I always get up at eight o`clock, but tomorrow I will get up a little later. +
4) What are you reading now?- I read Tom`s book. I am in a hurry. Tom will soon come, and I`ll have wanted to finish reading the book before he comes. -
... I AM READING...Tom will come SOON, and I would like to HAVE FINISHED...
5) As soon as you will see your friend, tell him that i will want to see him. - As soon as you SEE your friend...
6) when I came home yesterday, my brother was sleeping. +
7)when will you come to see us? - I will come tomorrow if i won`t busy. - I will come tomorrow, if I AM NOT busy.
8) I don`t kike apples. - I don't Like apples.
9) He was coming home at five o`clock yesterday. - He CAME home...