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many years ago people could sent messages over a long distance. they used light and smoke of fire, sound of drums.
In our days there are a lot of means of communication. we often communicate by means telephon and the Internet.
the first telephon were invited by Bell in 1842. there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of talking on the phone.
on the one hand we can communicate with our friends, reserve important information, phone for on ambulance and police.
But on the other hand we can waste our time, have no time to do homework and we can't see the eyes of the person you're speaking to.
As for me, I think telephon is very important because I can call my friends

Well,telephone is now big part of people's life.It hadn't become so long time after creating,but it's now very interesting and true useful.As my point of view,telephones aren't good all time.They've some negatives about that.On the one hand,it gives people alternative way of communication.If it asks about mobile phones,it also very interesting to use.on the other hand,it takes sometimes a lot of time speaking to somebody.If it's about mobile phones,they're very bad for yur health.I know all about that,but I can't live without that!!I can spoke with everbody I want,whenever I staying in the other country.All it's good,but I like more 'live' chating!And nothung can't beat him!!
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