Проверьте пожалуйста правильно ли написан текст??Правильно ли составлены предложения. Рассказ о себе

I'm very glad to tell you about myself. My name is Daria, surname is Krylova. I was born on 16 of September in 1992. I living in Mokhovoye, on the Sovetskaya street 41, flat 2. My phone number is +79504791748 . Also, I’ve got e-mail: xathepset@rambler.ru I'm not married. I want to achieve heights in my career. My occupation is a banking specialist. I'm graduated Secondary School, which are situated at Mokhovoye. I'm studied there from 1999 to 2008 years. Also, from 2008 to 2011 I was studies at the Technical School of Forestry, which are situated in Kungur. I want to add, that I have a work experience, because I working in IFNS Russian in Permskiy by a specialist from 2011. In conclusion, I want to tell you about my interests. When I have free time I like read books and magazines and sit at my computer or the internet/
исправила в некоторых. а в целом все правильно. только не совсем поняла последнюю фразу. исправила на просто сидеть в интернете

I am very glad to tell you about myself. My name is Daria, my surname is Krylova. I was born on the 16 of September 1992. I live in Mokhovoye, on Sovetskaya street 41, flat 2. My phone number is +79504791748. And my e-mail address is xathepset@rambler.ru. I'm not married. I want to /achieve heights in my career/ make a successful career. My job is a banking specialist. From 1999 to 2008 I went to (Secondary) school ( which is situated) in Mokhovoye. Then I studies at the Technical School of Forestry, which is situated in Kungur, from 2008 to 2011. I want to add, that I have work experience, because I have been working in IFNS Russian in Permskiy as a specialist since 2011. In conclusion, I want to tell you about my interests. When I have free time I like readind books and magazines and surf the internet.

I'm very glad to tell you about myself. My name is Daria, surname is Krylova. I was born on 16 of September in 1992. I living in Mokhovoye, on the Sovetskaya street 41, flat 2. My phone number is +79504791748 . Also, I’ve got e-mail: xathepset@rambler.ru I'm not married. I want to achieve heights in my career. My occupation is a banking specialist. I'm graduated Secondary School, which are situated at Mokhovoye. I'm studied there from 1999 to 2008 years. Also, from 2008 to 2011 I was studies at the Technical School of Forestry, which are situated in Kungur. I want to add, that I have a work experience, because I working in IFNS Russian in Permskiy by a specialist from 2011. In conclusion, I want to tell you about my interests. When I have free time I like read books and magazines and sit at my computer or the internet