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Здравствуйте. Помогите мне, срочно!!! Исправьте ошибки в моем сочинении (с английским всё плохо). Некоторые предложения я списала с других сочинений. Спасибо большое за вашу помощь!!!

"The person I admire"
When I think of someone spesial, who I could look up, my grandfather comes to my mind. He is rather old now, almost 70. Despire, he looks fresh (свежий). My grandfather has many good qualities (качества). Everyday he gets early in the morning. He starts the day with exercise. In thee afternoon he does different affairs (дела). His motto (девиз): "Be occupial ! " Becaise I think, that he hardworling man.
When I come to drandfather in the summer, I have a lot of things to do: draw, weed beds, pick up fructs, vegetables and berries. my dranddaddy always helps me. He has always been good to me.
I appericiable him, because he has a sunny soul, keep one’s promise, devoted himself to lovely affair, have a sense of humour and many many more! He is a great husband, a wonderful father and the best grandfather in the world.
When I think about someone special, who I could be proud of, my grandfather comes to my mind. He is rather old now, almost 70. THough, he looks fresh (свежий). My grandfather has many good qualities (качества). Everyday he gets early in the morning. He starts the day with exercise. At the afternoon he does different things (дела). His motto is (девиз): "Be occupial ! " Because I think, that he is hardworling man.
When I come to grandfather in summer, I have a lot of things to do: to draw, weed grass, to pick up fruits, vegetables and berries. my dranddaddy always helps me. He has always been kind to me.
I appericiate him, because he has a sunny soul, keep his promise, he is devoted to his lovely things, has a sense of humour and many many more good qualities! He is a great husband, a wonderful father and the best grandfather in the world

Что такое OCCUPIAL?
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Радик Бильданов
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Анастасия ... Это такое выражение "Be occupial", дословно переводится как "Без дела будешь скучать !"
"The person I admire"
When I think of someone spesial who I could look up, in my mind becomes my grandfather. He was rather old now, almost 70. Despire, he looks fresh (свежий). My grandfather has many good qualities (качества). Everyday he gets up early in the morning. He starts the day with exercise. In thee afternoon he does different affairs (дела). His motto (девиз): "Be occupial ! " Because I think, that he man ho working hard.
When I came to grandfather in the summer, I have a lot of things to do: draw, weed beds, pick up fruits, vegetables and berries. My granddaddy always help me. He has been always good to me.
I appericiable him, because he has a sunny soul, keeped one promise, devoted himself to lovely affair, have a sense of humour and many more! He was a great husband, a wonderful father and the best grandfather in the world.