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My name is Vita. I have a fine family. My mum IS ATTRACTIVE (прИвлекательная) , attentive, wise, AND accurate. She has a HARMONIOUS
figure. My father IS clever, HANDSOME (beautiful - говорят про женщин) , AND polite. He IS TALL AND strong (деревья, дома - высокие - high). And he IS really A gentleman. My grandmother IS generous and beautiful. And MY grandfather IS courageous, brave, and TALL (не очень красивое предложение: здесь черты характера и внешность - в одном флаконе) . I have four brothers. Denis IS very high, HANDSOME, and
attentive. Alex IS clever and attractive. Vania IS ATHLETIC-(LOOKING), accurate, and cheerful. And Nikita IS modest and very serious.
I love my family VERY MUCH. (I AM FOND OF MY FAMILY)
I have A very good friend. HE IS true, ??(вообще-то - betrayer - это предатель) , hardworking, HANDSOME, AND cheerful. And he has A good sense of humour. I like to spend time WITH HIM.

PS Английское предложение НЕ может быть без глагола (сказуемого)!!!
Людмила Бикбулатова
Людмила Бикбулатова
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My name is Vita. I have a fine family. My mom nice, attentive, wise, accurate. She has a harmonous

figure. My father clever, beautiful, polite. He high, strong. And he really gentleman. My grandmother generous and

beautiful. And the grandfather courageous, brave and high. I have four brothers. Denis very high, beautiful and

attentive. Alex clever and attractive. Vania sports, accurate and cheerful. And Nikita modest and very serious.
I very love my family.
I have very good friend. It true, betrayed, hardworking, beautiful, cheerful. And he has good sense of humour. I like to

spend with he time.

может так )))
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