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It's a well-known fact that people have a disagreement as to what is more important talent or discipline . Some people think that in any profession discipline is most important. The others believe that the talent is a way to succes.
In my opinion, talent is important but without the perseverance and discipline people can not succeeded. First of all, all the succesful people work seven days a week. If you want to be successful you have to work at it every day all your life. The work is the secret of the success of all successful individuals. None of them could succeed while lying on the couch. I agree that the talent is important too, but without discipline & tenacity its mean nothing.
Buе some people think that to be successful in their work enough to have talent.I don't agree with this. Talent is only a push to success, everithing else is a constant work.
To sum up there 2 opposite opinions about ensure progress in work. But i personaly think that if you want to be successful you must work hard.
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