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Text 1.

Move over game boys.

The text is concerned with
Lynn Robson creates the video games that thousands boys are playing today.

From the text we know that Lynn is a co-founder of Frognation. The
company creates soundtracks and designs and translates Japanese video games for
the UK market. According to the text Frognation represents producers with great
game ideas and helps them to sell their ideas to Sony or Nintendo in Tokyo.
Further on Lynn and her team provide advice on everything from the music
soundtrack and graphics to the game programming and characters. It should be
noted in the West, Lynn becomes the Japan expert, giving clients information
about Japanese culture. One of the main problems to pay attention to is Video
game sales are sky-rocketing, but women don't often play video games. In my
opinion Lynn clear head because few women pursuing
opportunities to build careers in the video game industry.

In conclusion we can say with more women like Lynn joining the video
game industry, however, things could change.

Text 2.

No hiding place.

The text is concerned with through communication
tools watch people. From the text we know
that cookie is a small file that a company can send to your computer when you
visit the company's website. It tells them a lot about your browsing habits.
According to the text when you turn on a mobile phone, the phone company can monitor
calls and also record the location of the phone. The use of video surveillance
cameras is also growing. One of the main problems to pay attention to is
engineers are now developing cameras that can "see" through clothing,
walls or cars. In conclusion we can say new technology offers substantial
benefits more security against terrorists and criminals, higher productivity at
work, a wider selection of products, more convenience.