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I remember my first
teacher very well. Her name was elena a..She and we met on the first
day of school on a warm autumn day. She has an incredibly warm personality. She
was middle-aged of medium. She is well build, wrinkled pale-skinned with rosy cheeks.She
usually wears brown curly hair in heatly bun which highlights her round
face.her smile whole face lights up. She wears light makeup and casual
clothes.

She was a kind
woman and paid much attention to us all. She taught us to read and write, told
us many interesting things about everything and she instructed us how to work.
She is very good professional. She loves children, and it is very important in
a teacher's work. will always remember e.a. I have only warm memories of those
years

Ilo · Accepted Answer

I remember my first teacher very well. 
Her name was/ is Elena.
We met her on the first day of school
It was a warm autumn day. 
She has an incredibly warm personality. 
She was/ is middle-aged and of medium height (?). 
She is well-built, wrinkled, pale-skinned with rosy cheeks. (грамматически верно, но как-то не очень про женщину, She has nice small wrinkles)
She usually wears brown curly hair in heatly (?) bun which highlights her round face.
Her smile lights up her face. 
She wears light makeup and casual clothes. 
She was/ is a kind woman and paid much attention to us all. 
She taught us to read and write, told us many interesting things about everything and she instructed us how to work.
She is a very good professional. 
She loves children, and it is very important in a teacher's work. 
I will always remember her.
 I have only warm memories of those years.

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Виталий Ковязин · Answer

I remember my first teacher he is very good. Her name was Elena and she 
we met on the first day of school in a warm autumn day. She has an 
incredible warm personality. It
was medium vozrasta well worth, wrinkled pale skin with pink cheeks.She
usually wears brown curly hair in heatly bun, which accentuates her round
face.her smile, your entire face lights up. She wears light makeup and casual clothes.

She
 was a good woman and paid much attention to all of us. She taught us to
 read and write, told us many interesting things about everything, she 
teaches us how to work.
She is a very good professional. She loves children and is very important in
pedagogical activity of the teacher. I will always remember E.A. I HAVE only fond memories of those years