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Андрей Журавлев

проверте на ошибки (англ яз ) пожалуйста помогите)))))))))

Dear Madam,

I’m writing to apply for the position of volunteer worker which I saw advertised in World Aid last week .I would be interested in teaching Spanish to primary children in your camp in Bangladesh . I enclose a copy of my CV.

I would like to work for you because I love children .When I communicate with them I don’t feel depressed as after the usual office work in business and fuel energy as a battery . From that work I get most of returns and children are really grateful . So when I see the results of my work I always forget all problems of our hard life. And the last reason to work with young people is to stay energetic, cheerful, young and charged their fresh minds .

I’m hardworking, organized, punctual and ambitious person . I have an experience in voluntary work .Two years ago I worked in school for children with special needs. So I can with ease teach every child .

On my mind, I could be a good primary teacher of Spanish due to my organizations, computers skills and teaching experience . On top of that, I hold a certificate in first aid, which might be useful .

I look forward to hearing from you .

Yours faithfully ,

Vlad Nicolaev

АД
Александр Духнов

and fuel energy as a battery - что вы хотите этим сказать?

From that work I get most of returns - о чем это?

...young and charged their fresh minds . -может быть,
...young and charged by their fresh minds . ?

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