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Алексей

Кто отлично знает английский и может отредактировать это маленькое письмо? просто просмотреть на наличие ошибок (граммати

просто просмотреть на наличие ошибок (грамматических и стелистических) буду благодарна.

I`m really glad to write you my first letter.
Firstly, I want to say that you may not worry about my age. I am only 22, but it does not mean that I have no life experience. Don`t think that I am a little princess. I am very serious in my search and I know what I want. I am looking for my love. I want to be a good wife and take care of my man. I`m ready for serious relationships and want to find my true love. The man, who will understand and love me.
I conjectured some questions which you can ask me.
FAMILY AND VALUES: I`m only one child in family but have 2 cousins, one of them only two month old. He is like a little angel. I like children very much and I`m glad that I can give one, two or three life more on this world. I`m family oriented person, who want to have strong and happy family. I appreciate kind, honest, well-educated and understanding people. Rich you or poor, have you big house or no, you are tall or not, color of your skin are not important for me. It just should be comfortable me to live with you and feel a kind spirit.
HOBBIES: I like dancing, singing, parties, cafes, traveling....My life is very active and positive. I`m not a boring person. I prefer to make this world more colorful. During my vacation I try to rest near to the nature and forget about all troubles. On weekends I prefer go to the cinema or park, in cafe with friends or just a walk on a street. Also we can go to the village in detach house and make a BBQ. I`m a good cook, so every evening you can try something delicious from me. By the way I don`t smoke and drink and it can makes our children healthy.
EDUCATION: I have a Master Degree of Economic. I have graduated the University. Before University I have finished the gymnasium. I think that is never too late to learn. So you can teach me and I will be a good student for you:)
WORK: I am working on firm which deals with saving and transportation coffee. I am working as a manager - secretary. I like my job, because it is interesting. Every day i get up with a big pleasure.

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Санечка Новикова

Hi babe. Your english is quite good, here are some things I would correct:

I have graduated the University --> I graduated from the University
Before University I have finished the gymnasium -->Before the University I (had) finished the gymnasium
I am working on firm.. ---> I work in a firm / I work for a firm
I`m ready for serious relationships -->I'm ready for a serious relationship

" Rich you or poor, have you big house or no, you are tall or not, color of your skin are not important for me. It just should be comfortable me to live with you and feel a kind spirit. " ----> Whether you are rich or poor, have a big house or small, what is your skin color or heigh, all those things are not important to me. It just should be comfortable for me to live with you and feel kindness in your soul.

Not all of them are necessary, though. Check your articles as well.

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