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Preparing for exams. Can someone check, please? Maybe you can also add sth, I absolutely run out of ideas.
I'd like to tell your about our
new exciting product, that is made from Protean. As I'm sure you know, this
fabric was named after Proteus, the early Greek sea
god who was able to change his shapes. So our new product is clothing for pets.
Protean is extremely flexible, that's why it will adapt to the body of your
pet, your can change colour of outwear at any time. The fabris is very strong,
so you shouldn't worry that your pet can damage it, you wouldn't spent a lot
money for clothes for your, because Protean is also long-lasting fabric. These
clothes will be light in dark, so you shouldn't anymore worry about losing your
pet at night. Clothes will cost about 30£, in our opininion, it's reasonable
price, that will atract the most buyers.

Our main
buyers will be owners of pets, of course, this market is quite new, so it will
be easier to attract people’s attention especially, If we’re speaking about
such unique produst.

Clothes made from protean can be
sold in specialized stores for pets or in department stores. Speaking about
advertising, we can cooperate with animal hospital and distribute brochures there. We can
also advertisment on Tv and in the newspaper.

Анастасия Волкова · Accepted Answer

Preparing for exams. Can someone check, please? May be you can also add smth, I absolutely run out of ideas.
I'd like to tell you about our new exciting product, that is made from Protean. I'm sure you know that this fabric was named after Proteus, the early Greek Sea
God, who was able to change his shapes. So our new product is clothing for pets.

Нина Безрученко · Answer

you wouldn't spenD a lot OF money for YOUR PET'S clothes, 
especially when we speak about such unique produCt. 
We can also PUT advertisment on Tv and in the newspaper.

Владимир Никитин · Answer

I'd like to tell your about our new exciting product made of (!) Protean. As I'm sure you know, this
fabric was named after Proteus, the early Greek sea god who could (! - general ability) change his appearance (!). So our new product is clothing for pets.
Protean is extremely flexible, that's why it will adapt to the body of your pet, your can change colour of outwear at any time. The fabris is very strong, so you shouldn't worry that your pet can damage it, {you will not have to spend} (!) a lot money on clothes for your pet (!), because Protean is also a (!) long-lasting fabric. These clothes will glow (!) in the (!) dark, so you shouldn't worry about losing your
pet at night anymore (!). Clothes will cost about 30£, in our opinion (! - лишнее in в слове) , it's a (!) reasonable price, that will attract (! без артикля) most buyers.
Our main buyers will be owners of pets, of course, this market is quite new, so it will be easier to attract people’s attention especially (! - запят. не нужна) If we’re speaking about such a (!) unique produst.
Clothes made of (!) protean can be sold in specialized stores for pets or in department stores. Speaking about advertising, we can cooperate with animal hospitals (!) and distribute brochures there. We can
also put (!) advertisements (!) on TV (!) and in newspapers (!).

сделать что-то из материала - обычно make (out) of (супермен - "человек из стали" - a man [made] of steel)
make from - обычно с выражением from scratch, from nothing и т. п.

Дмитрий · Answer

I'd like to tell your about our new exciting product made of (!) Protean. As I'm sure you know, this
fabric was named after Proteus, the early Greek sea god who could (! - general ability) change his appearance (!). So our new product is clothing for pets.
Protean is extremely flexible, that's why it will adapt to the body of your pet, your can change colour of outwear at any time. The fabris is very strong, so you shouldn't worry that your pet can damage it, {you will not have to spend} (!) a lot money on clothes for your pet (!), because Protean is also a (!) long-lasting fabric. These clothes will glow (!) in the (!) dark, so you shouldn't worry about losing your
pet at night anymore (!). Clothes will cost about 30£, in our opinion (! - лишнее in в слове) , it's a (!) reasonable price, that will attract (! без артикля) most buyers.
Our main buyers will be owners of pets, of course, this market is quite new, so it will be easier to attract people’s attention especially (! - запят. не нужна) If we’re speaking about such a (!) unique produst.
Clothes made of (!) protean can be sold in specialized stores for pets or in department stores. Speaking about advertising, we can cooperate with animal hospitals (!) and distribute brochures there. We can
also put (!) advertisements (!) on TV (!) and in newspapers (!).

сделать что-то из материала - обычно make (out) of (супермен - "человек из стали" - a man [made] of steel)
make from - обычно с выражением from scratch, from nothing и т. п.