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My grandmother is called Karashash. She is sixty-five and she lives with my grandfather in the house in the village. She works as the teacher.She doesn't have any hobbies, but she loves children and animals,especially cats . she loves to look the TV.
Karashash has got short, white hair, brown eyes, she is quite short.
She always wears lots of make-up, especially lipstick, and you can smell her perfume when she kisses you! She is a very cheerful woman. In fact, she's always smiling. She's also very generous and helpful.
My grandmother is a kind old woman, is very popular with her neighbours, maybe because she is so helpful.
she very sociable, likes to communicate with people
I love her very much. All her life she worked hard and now she is still very industrious and tender-hearted.
We are a very good family. We love each other very much.!