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My angel crying in the sky,
Raise eyes and take my mail,
You're so beautiful as Kai
From Hans`s fairy tale.
And even spring subdued by you,
Falls down to your leg,
And even roars a few
I shout to you "Come Back"
My angel of a chain broke off,
And now you are free,
Also the divine station "Love"
She's meeting dreamed we
I will be waiting for you years
And more than all my life,
Because you are my Tenderness
Envoy of goddess love...
Катя Индиго, 11.06.13.