Проверьте пожалуйста англ. текст. Cочинение на тему: "Море". Второй класс.

Question

1) I think summer is the best season, because it is a time of holidays. 
2) We can swim in the sea and sunbathing 
3) Every year my parents and I go to the sea, 
3) I like to rest with my cousin. 
4) We have a many games. 
6)We can swim on the warm water,walk on the wet sand and play volleyball on the beach. 
7)My mother helps me to learn to swim 
8)In the afternoon we have a rest near the pool,because the sun is shining stronger. 
9)In the evening we like to sit on the bench and watch the sea/ 
10)i It was a wonderful time

простите нумерация не верна.

Фёдор Волков · Accepted Answer

да не верная

Ирина Липейкене · Answer

1) I think summer is the best season, because it is a time of holidays. (the best time to have holidays) 
2) We can swim in the sea and sunbathing (sunbathe) 
3) Every year my parents and I go to the sea, 
3) I like to rest with my cousin. 
4) We have a many games. (we can play many games) 
6)We can swim on the warm water,walk on the wet sand and play volleyball on the beach. ( так не говорят) 
7)My mother helps me to learn to swim ( teaches me to swim) 
8)In the afternoon we have a rest near the pool,because the sun is shining stronger. 
9)In the evening we like to sit on the bench and watch the sea/ 
10)i It was a wonderful time (зачем прошедшее время? it is ...)

Алевтина =) · Answer

We have a many games - неопределенный артикль ко множественному числу, swim in