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one famous company "mulino bianco" advertises new type of chocolate biscuits. the slogan of the company is "Discover the world to dream and to create".This advertising shows small smiling children which deep chocolate biscuits in the milk while his mother looks at him. then another scene - one" family, mother, father and two children wich have breakfast toghether with the biscuits of "mulino bianco". at last we see a field on which there are lying peopleб they eat biscuits. advertising says that in the preparation of biscuits the best flour that is very good for small children, is used. advertising hopes to sell more biscuits.

что-то примерно так. Сложно без знаков препинания )
И есть некоторые моменты, где надо править структуры предложений. Но в целом - так

.>>>in this advertising show small..' advertisement, если имеется в виду "в этой рекламе"
"in this advertisement show small smiling children" лучше сказать in this adverisement we can see small smiling children и далее по тексту

@ field on which there are laid peoples tha@ laiding

dvertising says that in the preparation - на мой взгляд the здесь неуместно

Я бы написала так:
One well-know company "mulino bianco" advrtises the new type of chocolate biscuits. "Discover the world to dream and to create"- company's slogan. Smiling kid that deep chocolate biscuites in the milk while his mother is looking at him is shown in the add. Then we see a family with two children who have breakfast together with the biscuits "mulino bianco". In the end there are people that lay on the field and eat chocolate biscutes. The add promises that the flour of best quality is used in biscuits cooking. The company hopes to sell as many biscuites as possible.