Помогите с англ! :)

I think, that my family AND THE ONE OF THE Luckburts ARE VERY MUCH ALIKE. (для обозначения всей семьи помимо окончания множ. числа, требуется опред. артикль) . When(!) i was a child, my parents always took ME out.(этого уже достоаточно, обозначает, что всё время ходили со мной куда-нибудь) Also my family always FOUND SOME TIME to play with me. And the Luckburts' family (апостроф нужен, так как употребили слово "семья")think that (запятые расставили по правилам пунктуации русского языка, а не англ. . Они здесь НЕ нужны) the best thing you can give your children is time - the one ( заменяет слово "время", во избежание повторения) which is deveted for playing with THE children, talking with them. Also my parents always said that i CUOLD (по правилам согласования времён, так как глагол в главном предложении стоит в прош. времени) DO football (этот глагол отлично идёт со всеми видами спорта) or play the guitar, but only if i wantED. SO THEY HAVE NEVER IMPOSED THEIR WISHES, DECISIONS and TASTES ON ME. THEY HAVE ALWAYS SET ME FREE TO MAKING MY OWN CHOICE. THEY HAVE NEVER INSISTED ON ME DOING WHAT THEY WANTED. AND NEITHER HAVE the Luckburts' family. THEY JUST encourage THEIR kids to play the piano, but THEY DON'T PRESS ON THEM.
Последнее предложение я убрала, не понятно, почему Вы конкурируете с этой семьёй.

I think, that my family is similar to Luckburt's family . When i was a child, my parents always took time to go out with me. My family always had time to play with me. And the luckburt's family think, that, the best thing you can give your children is time. Time spent playing and talking with children. Also my parents always said that i can training footbal or play the guitar, but only if i want to. and the luckburt's family encourage our kids to play the piano ( "but only or themselves" здесь не понятно) . My parents and the luckburts are competitive.