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Fans heavy-metal is the youth subculture inspired by music in style metal, appeared in 1980.

The subculture is widely widespread in Northern Europe, is wide enough - in Russia, Ukraine, Belarus, in Northern America, South America.

The typical fashion among many fans of heavy-metal can be described so: Long hair at men, a leather jacket, a leather waistcoat, black T-shorts or loose overalls with a trade mark of favourite metal group, клепанные belts with thorns, circuits on jeans, stripes on clothes and
Other surrounding subjects with images of groups favourite metal, heavy footwear, usual high boots. Short boots with circuits, jeans, leather trousers.

Unlike other subcultures, such as Gotha and punks, the subculture of fans of heavy-metal is deprived strongly pronounced ideology and concentrated only around of music.
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Эти "hеavy metal fans" называются "metalheads"

Дарья, там не especially, а "довольно широко", то есть широко, но не так широко, как в Северной Европе, я бы написал "also".

Последнее предложение: лишена ярко выраженной идеологии = does not have any specific ideology behind and focuses exceptionally on the music.

Ой, гы-гы.. . circuits on jeans :))) Цепи - это в данном случае chains :))) Хоть бы в словарь удосужился заглянуть, Валерий. Металхеды негадуэ!
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Fans oOF THE heavy-metal is A youth subculture inspired by music in METAL style, appeared in 1980.

The subculture is widely Spread in Northern Europe, ESPECIALLY - in Russia, THE Ukraine, Belarus, Northern America, South America.

The typical fashion among many fans of heavy-metal can be described THIS WAY: Long hair FOR men, a leather jacket, a leather waistcoat, black T-shorts or loose overalls with a trade mark ? (с торговой маркой? label) of their favourite metal group, revited belts with thorns, circuits on jeans, stripes on clothes and
Other THINGS CONNECTED WITH images of FAVOURITE METAL groups: heavy footwear, usual? high boots. Short boots with circuits, jeans, leather trousers.

Unlike other subcultures, such as GothS and punks, the FAN'S subculture of heavy-metal is STRONGLY deprived pronounced? ideology and concentrated only around THE music.
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