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Люди, кто проверит у меня описание по поводу англ.языка?:)

Мне надо было составить короткое описание книги "Волшебник изумрудного города"
вот что я сделала:

1) Alexander Volkov wrote the book "The wizard of Oz".
2) The book "The wizard of Oz" is a fairy tale. There are a lot of adventures and funny characters. It read worldwide, and children, and adults.
3) The girl Alley fall at the fairyland with her dog Totoshka.
4) Alley want to come home and she go to the wizard of Oz. She hope the wizard can help her.
5) By the way to the wizard, the girl meets a lot of devoted friends.
6) At fairyland they had to experince dangerous adventures.
7) "The wizard of Oz" is one of good works of the great Russian writer Alexander Volkov.
8) The reader learns about the wonderful adventures which happened to the heroes of the fairy tale during their unusual traveling across the fairyland in the search of the Wizard of Oz.

если не сложно проверьте, заранее спасибо!)
Armine Pogosyan
Armine Pogosyan
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1) Alexander Volkov wrote the book "The wizard of Oz".
2) The book "The wizard of Oz" is a fairy tale. There are a lot of adventures and funny characters. It IS read worldwide,BY children and adults.
3) girl Alley fallS DOWN at the fairyland with her dog Totoshka.
4) Alley wantS to come home and she goES to the wizard of Oz. She hopeS the wizard can help her.
5) By the way to the wizard, the girl meets a lot of devoted friends.
6) At THE fairyland they haVE to experince dangerous adventures.
7) "The wizard of Oz" is one of good works of the great Russian writer Alexander Volkov.
8) The reader learns about the wonderful adventures which happen to the heroes of the fairy tale during their unusual traveLling across the fairyland in the search of the Wizard of Oz.
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Елена Пенсионерочка
Елена Пенсионерочка
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Вообще-то Волков этой книги не писал. Ее написал Фрэнк Баум.
1) Alexander Volkov has written the book "The wizard of Oz".
2) It is read worldwide, by both of children and adults.
3) The girl Alley falls down at the fairyland with her dog Totoshka.
4) Alley wants to come home and she goes to the wizard of Oz. She hopes the wizard can help her.
5) By the way to the wizard, the girl meets a lot of devoted friends.
6) At the fairyland they have to experince the dangerous adventures.
7) "The wizard of Oz" is one of the best works of the great Russian writer Alexander Volkov.
8) The reader learns about the wonderful adventures which happened to the heroes of the fairy tale during their unusual travelling across the fairyland in the search of the Wizard of Oz.