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Polish language ...Pub not pab ,..night club
And - Flying or Frying ?

Objective: To receive a post of the main barman
Education: Russian International Academy fot Tourism, a 4th year student, speciality - Hospitality.
Knowledge of languages: Russian (native), English (good), Polish (good), German (fair)
Key subject studied: Management, Marketing, Economic Theory, Accounting, Psychology, Animations, Cultural Science, Etiquette
Skills: Knowledge of languages, Knowledge classic cocktails, Flyring, Communication skills.
Extracurricular Activities а Flyring course, 2006
Also enjoy Playing the guitar, drawing
Personal Information: Russian citizen. Single
Work Experience Yakitoria Sushi bar, Dreadnought pub, Manhattan, Don Chento Jazz bar, Platinum Night club.
References Available upon request

Вот когда будет царь, тогда будешь писать a subject of the Russian tzar.
Честно говоря, не знаю что такое Flyring. Тебе знать лучше.

давайте это все по-русски

CHIEF barman лучше
в опыте рекомендую написать должности, конечно, и сроки работы.

Objective : Receiving a position of the chief barman или просто the position оf the chief barman
Education: Russian International Academy of Tourism, the 4th year student, speciality - Hospitality.
Knowledge of languages: Russian (good), English (good), Poland (good), German (fair) - good - звучит некрасиво. пиши fluent и что означает fair
Key subject studied Management, Marketing, Economic Theory, Accounting, Psychology, Animations, Cultural Science (это, насолько я понимаю культурология? Ты уверен что перевод такой? Я думаю, что лучне Culturology), Etiquette
Skills and Knowledge: Foreign languages, Knowledge of classic cocktails receipts, Flyring, Communication skills.
Extracurricular Activities Flyring courses, 2006
Also enjoy Playing the guitar, drawing
Personal Information Russian, Single
Work Experience Sushi bar – Yakitoria, pab. - Dreadnought, Manhattan, Jazz bar – Don Chento. Nigh club – Platinum. ( пиши кем работал, и период работы)
References Available upon request