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This graph shows changes in the popularity of actor over a period 1991 to 2018 of twenty seven years.

In 1991 popularity of actor was 7,9 points of general ranking. It was one of three picks of his popularity.
However there was a sharp decrease from 8 to 6 points – the lowest point in 1994. Then popularity increased significantly between 1994 and 1997. And after that line of graph had a steady trend to upward until 2003, but dipped briefly in 2000, then recovered and reached a second pick of 7,9 points in 2003.
Next there was again a slight fall to 7 points and line of graph remained steady for several years – from 2004 until 2012.
During the period 2012 to 2015 line of graph of popularity fluctuated and reached a third and the highest pick in 2016 of 8,1 points.
Finally, the line declined rapidly to 7 points and to 2018 leveled out.

So, we can see that the films with the maximal ranking in this graph are The Case-book of Sherlock Holmes (1991), Cold Mountain (2003) and The Young Pope (2016).
To summarize, average ranking of actor is 7,08. In the beginning it was 7,9 points and now 6,8 from 10
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«This graph shows changes in the popularity of actors over a period from 1991 to 2018.

«In 1991 the popularity was 7,9 points of general ranking. It was one of three picks. However, there was a sharp decrease from 8 to 6 points – the lowest point in 1994. Then it increased significantly between 1994 and 1997. And after that the graph line had a steady trend upward until 2003, but dipped briefly in 2000, then recovered and reached the second pick of 7,9 points in 2003.

Next there was a slight fall again to 7 points and the graph line remained steady for several years – from 2004 until 2012.

During the period of 2012 to 2015 the line fluctuated and reached the third and highest pick in 2016 of 8,1 points.

Finally, the line declined rapidly to 7 points and in 2018 leveled out.

So, we can see that the films with the maximal ranking in this graph are The Case-book of Sherlock Holmes (1991), Cold Mountain (2003) and The Young Pope (2016).

To summarize, the average ranking of actors is 7,08. In the beginning it was 7,9 points and now 6,8 from 10».
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Не совсем, правда, понял тему «actor»: один актёр или нет. Там, выше, стоит «actors», но если нет, замени на «the actor».

Вот и всё.
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Екатерина Кузьмина
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Могу за пивком сгонять, если ЧЁ....
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Денис Султанов
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1) FROM 1991 to 2018
2) in 1991 THE popularity
3) AT the beginning ( т. к. in the beginning должно иметь предмет после себя . Например, in the beginning of the book ...) В остальном все грамотно ) Удачи ;)
Жанна Джумбаева
Жанна Джумбаева
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