Проверьте, пожалуйста, ошибки в тексте на английском языке (всего 6 предложений разговорного уровня).

Some Mistakes:
1) and A chihuahua (хотя можт и ваш вариант подойдёт, если собака ваша :))?Т. к. my здесь может охватывать оба объекта)
2)interestS
3)travelling -вроде больше подходит
4)лучше the whole world
5)just здесь уместнее, чем only
6)go to the concerts
7)photoshootING and partying если на то пошло
8)planS
9)share travel(??)
10)and help people who live in ...
11)believe

My name is Arina. Nineteen years ago I was born in Saint-Petersburg but now I live in Moscow with my boyfriend and A/MYchihuahua (звучит нелестно для молодого человека) . I'm a second-year student at THE PsychologY department (of what - a university?) Иkи I am a second-year psycology student. One of my greatest interestS is travel! I want to see THE WHOLE WORLDl the world. I HAVE VISITED visited more than 10 countries (eleven?) and it's only THE beginning! ALSO, I have A passion for fashion, THERE ARE about 50 pairS of shoes in my closet, I love to go TO concerts of my favourite musicians, shop, learn/STUDY languages, photosessions(taking pictures) and partyING from dusk till dawn. One of my future biggest planS is my own charity( a charity of my own) where I could share travel(?) and help people who live in (extreme) poverty. I belive in myself, love and peace!