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Life's a game, and I'm a player in it. Without money you're nothing, so you need to get it. And I think about my goal. I'll achieve it for myself. And nobody can stop me, because I'm on my way. (можете оставить nobody can't stop me, если хотите звучать как чёрный или рэднек :-)) It's not cool, believe me)
Tomorrow is a new day. New things are going to happen. The sun will rise in the sky. Life is going on again. My thoughts are about what tomorrow will bring, I don’t know really. But we’ll find it out after this day. Life’s a hard way for me. The one who has a lot of experiences wins in this race. Every day time flies faster, but you shouldn't stop. We must go along this way. Earn a lot of money, make a career man, come off the ground up in the air like a smoke. But I don't force all of you to do all that I've said. I breathe the air just like you and my song too. And that’s all true.

Виталий, тут нет ошибок... Может Кто-то и найдет... но я не вижу ни одной...

Life is a game and I'm a player here. You're nothing without money so you need to have it. I have an aim. I've made a decision and nobody can stop me because i'm already on my way.

Tomorrow is a new day. New things gonna happen. Sun will rise in the sky. Life will start again. I don't really know why I'm thinking it will happen tomorrow. But we will all find out the next day. Life is difficult. It takes a lot of experience and strength to have wings in this race. Time whirls faster but you don't need to stop it. Just go along with it. Earn a lot of money, make a career, grow and prosper. I don't force all this on you. I breathe oxygen like you and that's all true.

Вместо oxygen лучше было бы слово air...

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