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Ideal is a person, what we are imitate his/her. We want to be like for our ideal.
Often our ideals are famous people.
If we get to know about life, dreams, ideas ideal person, we think that this
ideal person is the best and the perfectest men all over the world.
My ideal is character novel`s "Gone with the wing" Margaret Mitchell Scarlett O`Hara. Her motte
was quotation "I'll think about it tomorrow". I think that it is rightly, becouse tomorrow you
can to work out your problems more quiet and more clever. Scarlett is not perfect person, but
she is striking, ambiguous, attractive, exceptional, coquette, disposition. She is purposeful
and always achieve own goals. She is selfish, capricious, but kind at heart.
Though she helps, takes care of her nears, accepts decisions independently, defend oneself.
I think that true woman must be like Scarlett.
я вам исправила все, были ошибки, но текст более не менее понятен. если есть вопросы спрашивайте!

Ideal is a person (that) we are trying to emulate.We want to be like our ideal.
Often our ideals are celebrities (известная личность) .
When we get to know about life, dreams, ideas of ideal person, we think that this
ideal person is the best and the most perfect person in the whole world.
My ideal is a character from the novel "Gone with the wind" by Margaret Mitchell, Scarlett O`Hara. Her motto
was a phrase "I'll think about it tomorrow". I think that it is right, because tomorrow you
can deal with your problems in more calm and clever way. Scarlett is not a perfect person, but
she is striking, ambiguous, attractive, exceptional, coquette. She is purposeful
and always achieves her goals. She is selfish, capricious, but has a kind heart.
Though she helps her nears (?это вы что имели ввиду, я не поняла) and also takes care of them, she makes decisions independently and is able to defend herself.
I think that a true woman must be like Scarlett.
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Валерий Харлин
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Артём Захаров Coquette -это тоже существительное. И, наверное, имеется в виду ambitious, а не ambiguous. Большой труд, хотя у вас тоже артиклей не хватает.
Валерий Харлин @Sagitta так доисправляйте, если артиклей не хватает!
@ддт хватит умничать! чтоб вы знали столько языков, сколько я!
очень много ошибок...
Ideal is a person, who we imitate. We want to be like our ideal.
Often our ideals are famous people.
If we get to know about life, dreams, ideas of ideal person, we think that this
ideal person is the best and the most perfect men all over the world.
My ideal is character novel`s "Gone with the wing" Margaret Mitchell Scarlett O`Hara. Her motte
was quotation "I'll think about it tomorrow". I think that it is rightly, because tomorrow you
can work out your problems better. Scarlett is not perfect person, but
she is striking, ambiguous, attractive, exceptional, coquette, disposition. She is purposeful
and always achieve own goals. She is selfish, capricious, but kind at heart.
Though she helps, takes care of her nears, accepts decisions independently, defend oneself.
I think that true woman must be like Scarlett. слово disposition вообще сюда не подходит, это существительное
Ринат Абузарович наверное я не все исправила, потому что и в правду очень много ошибок, чего то могла не заменить/ не очень понять