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The Internet is very popular. Many people use it. It is difficult to imagine our lives without the Internet nowadays. But what pluses and minuses it has?
On the one hand the Internet has many positive aspects. For example: it gives instant access to information; lets communicate with people on the other site of the world; people can download music, movies and many other things on the Internet. Also the Internet helps to study and do shopping.

However, the Internet has negative aspects. For instance: addiction, waste of time, money, health. But first of all it is viruses on sites, therefore it is need to use a reliable anti-virus software. Other minus is the violent content - the Internet has a lot cruelty and violence.

In conclusion, our life without the Internet would be scanty.
Владимир Васильев
Владимир Васильев
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The Internet is very popular. Many people use it. It is difficult to imagine our lives without the Internet nowadays. But what pluses and minuses DOES IT HAVE?On the one hand the Internet has many positive aspects. For example: it gives instant access to THE information; ALLOWS TO communicate with people on the other site of the world; people can download music, movies and many other things FROM the Internet. Also the Internet helps to study and TO do shopping. However, the Internet has negative aspects. For instance: CASES OF addiction (Ведь не все страдают интернет-зависимостью.. .) , waste of time, money AND health. But first of all is viruses on sites, therefore ONE NEEDS to use a reliable antivirus software. Other minus INCLUDES the violent content - the Internet has a lot OF cruelty and violence. In conclusion, our life without the Internet would be scanty.
Димаска Diesel Бутов
Димаска Diesel Бутов
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But first of all is viruses on sites - But first of all, there are viruses on websites //

on the other site of the world - on the other SIDE of the world //

our life without the Internet would be scanty - our life would be scanty without the Internet
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Albina Kasen
63 395
The Internet is very popular. Many people use it. It is difficult to
imagine our lives without the Internet nowadays. But what pluses and
minuses НAS IT?On the one hand the Internet has many positive
aspects. For example: it gives instant access to THE information; ALLOWS
TO communicate with people on the other site of the world; people can
download music, movies and many other things FROM the Internet. Also the
Internet helps to study and TO do shopping. However, the Internet has
negative aspects. For instance: CASES OF addiction, waste of TIME, money AND health. But
first of all is viruses on sites, therefore ONE NEEDS to use a reliable
antivirus software. Other minus INCLUDES the violent content - the
Internet has a lot OF cruelty and violence. In conclusion, our life
without the Internet would be scanty.
Роман Безмогорычный
Роман Безмогорычный
46 897

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