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1. What do you think about price for our education? I think it’s very expensive, and not everyone can allow it to himself! Do you agree?
2. I’m absolutely agree with you. The prices for learning are huge. But unfortunately now even elementary education is paid.
1. Now it's very difficult to go on the budgetary position ate the university, but many people haven't money for paid position. Do you think, that it helps that everyone wants to learn better?
2. No, i don't agree, because in this situation in our country on the contrary more ill-educated. But I think, that the importance of education is exaggerate.
1. Maybe you're right, the diploma - it is not a ticket to life, because you must have brains.
2. I agree. But all employers at the first place looks at your diploma.
1. Yes, the diploma is important, but now if you haven't friends everywhere you can't find a good job!
2. That's true, I'm study at IR department and i don't think, that all of us will work in this area.
1. Well, but this is prestigious and we are study 2 languages.
2. Do you want to be a master?
1. No, never! I don't want to spend my youth and than work at the Univesity, where pay is not so very big.
2. Oh.. so many teacher at the university to take a bribes, do you hear about it?
1. Yes, but it’s very dangerous.
2. I think that a master's degree receive only those who want to work at the university and become a Candidate of Sciences.
1. Do you know that after December, 31 qualification Bachelor and Master will be the main qualification for entering Russian universities?
2. Are you sure? I don’t know about it. I think it's very good. Those who don’t want to learn, may take a bachelor's degree.
Девушка, тут весь текст править ((

Из самого очевидного:
price не может быть expensive, лучше сказать High
I argee вместо I'm agree
позволить себе - не allow (это буквально дать разрешение) , а afford.
importance is exaggeratED
говорите либо "haven't got friends" либо "don't have friends", но никак не "haven't friends"
i'm studying
перед that запятые не нужны, в английском русские правила пунктуации не действуют)
Do you want to be a master звучит как-то смешно - ты хочешь стать повелителем? . Do you want to receive a master's degree?
at the University, where the salary isn't very big
take bribes - без to
в предпоследней реплике 2 соблюдайте порядок слов - подлежащее, сказуемое, и все остальное

и разберитесь с лексикой, потому что я не уверен, что "бюджетное место" и "платное образование" будет звучать именно так, как у вас.
because in this situation in our country on the contrary more ill-educated - это вообще что?

ps извиняюсь за критику, не хотел обидеть! но текст и правда довольно плох ((
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1. What do you think of the price of education/the education cost in our country?
I think it’s very high, and not everyone can afford it! Do you agree?

2. I absolutely agree with you. The tuition fees are huge. But, unfortunately, now even elementary education isn't free of charge any more.