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24th March 2016

Dear Sven,

Hi! How’s life? Thanks for your letter which I’ve recently received! You asked me what I reckon you should do about plenty of free time which you have in summer. Let me tell you what I think you should do about it. Have you thought about coming to my city? I am inviting you over for the summer holidays!
We will have a lot of time in our hands and we will be able to live life in the fast lane during these holidays! I will try my best to make you feel at home in our city. I suppose that the first thing we will have to do is to go sightseeing. I will show you our local attractions and the most beautiful places. I’m sure you will like it! Secondly, we really must take a look of our Kremlin. It is the most famous attraction in our city. And on the other side, we’ll be able to go down the Bolshaya Pokrovskaya street. Oh, I know it would be hard for you to read this  Try your best!
Apart from sightseeing, why not to while away the time playing soccer or basketball or whatever it will be for fun. What’s more, we’ll be able to go out for a night on the town.
Concerning the place where we are going to stay: just don’t worry and take your mind off it! My parents will be absent at that time. So, we will live this opportunity up. So, I hope there will be no problems with our plans and you will pay me a visit

Let me know if you want to know anything else. I’ll be looking forward to your answer Take care.

All the best

Dima.
МИ
Марина Исаченкова
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Можно я только по оформлению пройдусь?
1) Дата справа должна быть
2) Hi излишне. Вы уже поздоровались: Dear Sven
3) После All the best нужна запятая.
4) После имени (Dima) точка не ставится.
Рушана Хайруллина
Рушана Хайруллина
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Марина Исаченкова то что справа я знаю, просто здесь нельзя сделать текст справа
Hi, Dear Sven,
now is it going? Thanks for the letter I’ve recently received!

You asked me what I reckon you should do about plenty of free time which you have in summer. Let me tell you what I think you should do about it. Have you thought about coming to my city?
I invite you to visit me for the summer vacations!

We will have a lot of time in our hands and we will be able to live life in the fast lane during these holidays!

I will try my best to make you feel as at your own home in our city. I suppose that the first thing we will have to do is to go sightseeing.

I will show you our local attractions and the most beautiful places. I’m sure you will like them! Secondly, we really must take a look at Kremlin.

It is the most famous attraction in our city. And on the other side, we’ll be able to go down the Bolshaya Pokrovskaya street. Oh, I know it would be hard for you to read this  Try your best!
Apart from sightseeing, why not to spend some time playing soccer or basketball or whatever it will be for fun. What’s more, we’ll be able to go out for a night on the town.
Concerning the place where we are going to stay: just don’t worry and take your mind off it! My parents will be absent at that time. So, we will live this opportunity up. So I hope there will be no problems with our plans and you will enjoy the visit

Let me know if you want to know anything else. I’ll be looking forward for your answer.

Kind regards,
Dima.

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ну глянул слегка, вполне понятно . Кое-что исправил. Норм. письмо
Екатерина Гольнева
Екатерина Гольнева
16 740
it is not polite to read letters!
Дамир Тулеутаев
Дамир Тулеутаев
11 596
Марина Исаченкова It's really really true)) But it is more impolitely to make mistakes in a letter) So, may I ask for help, please? I allow you to read this one)
who the hell writing so damn long and huge reply in 2016?
Хамза Ляпин
Хамза Ляпин
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