переведите пожалуйста на английский это грамотно и точно? (см внутри)

Myspace Administration greets you.
We report you that a part of data (или лексически корректнее some data), the system, and a third of user's accounts were stolen. We're trying to correct this error now. For it we're need for your password and login to restore your account and to avoid of sending spam from your account. We'll also send a new safe password for you. It's very important for You and for our server. We ask you to do it to avoid of troubles with MySpace system and to save Your account from next breakings.

Administration of MySpace greet you.
We inform you,that part of data, system and one third of user profiles were stolen. At the moment we try to correct the error.We need you password and a login to restore you profile and to avoid sending spam from your name. We'll also send you new safe password.
That is very important for You and our server. We ask you to do that to aviod problems with MySpace system and to prevet you profile from further attacks...

Это вам зачем? пароли у людей тырить??

Типа янки лохи?

The administration of Myspace greets You. We inform you that a part of the data system and the third of profiles of the users were stolen. We are on the way of correcting this mistake now. We need your password and log in to restore your profile and avoid sending of a spam from your name (on behalf of your name).
We also will send you a new safe (harmless) password.
It is very important for You and for our server. We appeal to you to act this way in order to avoid troubles with the system of Myspace and to keep safety your profile from the following breakings - in.

You greet the Administration myspace.
we report You that part data, system and the one third of the profiles of the users were stolen. Presently we try to correct this error. For this we need your password and логин to restore your профайл and avoid the sending out спама from your name. In the same way we shall send You new safe password.
This much it is important for You and our server. We ask You this do in avoiding the troubles with system myspace and to save Your profile from the following breaking in.

You are welcomed by Administration myspace.
We inform you, that the part of data, system and third of profiles of users have been stolen. Now we try to rectify this error. For this purpose your password and a login is necessary to us to restore your profile and to avoid a spam sending from your name. As we will send you the new safe password.
It is very important for you and our server. We ask you it to make in avoidance of troubles with system myspace and to keep your profile from the subsequent breakings.
Я не знаю точно или нет!!!

Competently and precisely