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Good evening guys. I guess everyone has embarrassing experiences that make them laugh and feel angry or ashamed at the same time. Today I'm going to share with you an extremely embarrassing experience of mine. This also happens to be the funniest.

When I was 12, I often visited my classmate and we played PlayStation together. My friend's mother was at work during the day so we had the flat to ourselves. When the friend's mother got home and saw the mess we'd made, she naturally got angry every time. She literally hated our gaming sessions.

One day after school we went to my friend's place to play. We had bought food and drinks and were going to have a great time. In the middle of a heated battle we were enjoying a lot we suddenly heard the door bell. My friend's mother had finished work much earlier that day!

On an impulse, we decided to hide. We ran to the balcony and crouched there. Some time later
my friend's mother also came out on the balcony to have a fag. She couldn't see us while she was smoking. She noticed us only then when she had stubbed out the smoke.

For a few long seconds we just stared at each other. The suddenly my friend's mother burst into laughter. To this day I remember that funny feeling we shared on the balcony.