Кто хорошо знает английский, проверьте правильность написания текста, пожалуйста.

Проверил. Много ошибок.

Английский язык знаю далеко нехорошо, но все-таки скажу. Д. б. "I am worried". "Excuse my disturbing you" - м. б. , тут "Excuse me for ..." звучало бы поопрятнее и т. д. и т. п.

вот так

Hi, Jong!
How are you?
There are very little news from you. I'm worrying.
Oh... Sorry...
May i introduce myself? My name is Lana.
I'm from Russia, living in Moscow-city
Excuse me for disturbing you. We do not know each other, but i hopie, that we will meet soon. Looking forward to it. Can you wait for me?
Oh... So awkward of me.
I'm student. I'm interested in literature and cinema. I like music, like listening to F.T.Island.
I;m studying foreign languages and I like chinese language very much. But i'm learning korean language too.
I want to say:"thank you to F.T.Island and personally to you". Owing to JongHoon I opened for myself new opportunities in a certain period my life . Actually you are a very important person for me. It is stupid. I am a stupid. We do not know each other and I do not know what is this feeling, but I'm sure that I can not erase you from my heart. I am a lot of effort put into this recognition, please, do not ignore it!
I'm afraid i'm taking up too much of your time. It's time to say goodbye!
I wish you success. Cheer up.
Come to Russia together with F.T.Island next year.
Give my best regards to your members group.

Hi, Jong!
How are you?
Haven't heard from you for a while. I'm worring.
Oh... Sorry...
May I introduce myself? My name is Lana.
I'm from Russia, currently living in Moscow.
Excuse me if I disturb you. We do not know each other, but I hope, we will meet soon. I am looking forward to it. Could you wait for me?
Oh... I am making it awkward.
I'm a student. I'm interested in literature and cinema. I like music, like listening to F.T.Island.
I study foreign languages and I very like chinese language. But i am learning korean language too.
Want to say:"thank you F.T.Island and especially you personally". Because of you JongHoon now I have new opportunities in my life. Actually you are very important person for me. It is stupid. I am stupid. We do not know each other and I do not know what this feeling is, but I'm sure that I can not erase you from my heart. I put a lot of effort into this declaration, please, do not ignore it!
I'm afraid I'm taking up too much of your time. It's time to say goodbye!
I wish you all the best. Cheer up.
Come to Russia with F.T.Island next year.
Best regards to the members of your group.

Пиши как я сказал, и не придётся краснеть, предыдущий полеглот знает английский не лучше тебя, без обид )