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I like many different types OF music. Hip hop is my favourite ONE, but I also listen TO rap. My favourite band is callED Fugees. I love ITS CD. The Score: ITS songs are intelligent and have excellent tunes. Sometimes I LISTEN to classical music. I like Verdi and Puccini. I don't go TO concerts, because I prefer listening to music at home

I like many different types of music. Hip hop is my favourite one, but also I enjoy Rap . My favourite band is Fugees. I love theirs CD. "The Score" - the songs are intelligent and have excellent tunes. Sometimes I listen to classical music. I like Verdi and Puccini. I don't go to concerts because I prefer (to listen) или listening to music at home.

my favourite ONE
different types OF music
is called "Fugees"
I listen TO

go TO concerts

и я- I всегда с большой буквы

I like many different types OF music. Hip hop is my favourite, but I also listen TO THE rap music. My favourite band is callED Fugees. I love their'S CD. The Score - songs are intelligent and have excellent tunes. Sometimes i listen to THE classical music. I like Verdi and Puccini. I don't go TO concerts because i prefer listen to THE music at home.

LISTEN TO THE MUSIC - тут зависит от препода ставить The или не ставить. В разговорном приемлемы оба варианта.

I like many types of music. My favourite type is hip hop, bat also I listen rap. My favourite band is Fugees/ I love their CD. Teir songs are intelligent and have excellent tunes. Somtimes I listenclassical music/ I like Verdi and Puccini, but I dont go to the concerts, I prefer listen music at home.
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