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I am a disciple grade 10.
Now I am doing lessons.
Yesterday I went to the cinema.
My sister helped Mom.
When they do the room, come my friend.
He wanted me to play chess.
My sister said that I went to the cinema.
The evening I called him.

i'am study in 10 form. i'am doing homework now. I went yesterday in a cinema. My sister have helped my mother. When she smarten up her flat, my friend is comming. He wants to play chess with me. My sister said, that i went to a cinema. i called him tonight yesterday.

Ну.... вообще-то чтобы отвечать на подобные вопросы, нужно быть уверенным на 100% в правильности своего ответа)) ) А иначе -извините- это медвежья услуга)) ) Не в порядке критики, а призыв к ответственности. ( Это я о первых двух ответах- прошу не обижаться!)))))) ) А вот смотрю- и 3-4-неверно, ну а дальше-не успею-прибавляются ответы.. .

I am a pupil ( student) of the tenth form.
I am doing my lessons now.
I went to the cinema yesterday.
My ( little ) sister helped our mother.
When she was doing( cleaning, tidying up) the room, my friend came .
He wanted to play chess with me.
My sister said that I had gone to the cinema.
I phoned him in the evening.

Now I do lessons.
Yesterday I went to cinema.
My sister helped mum.
When it cleaned a room, my friend has come.
It wished to play with me in a chess.
My sister has told, that I have gone to cinema.
In the Evening I have called to it.

1000 процентов все точно, ногу на облизывание даю))

1. I am a pupil of the 10th form.
2. I am doing my homework now.
3. Yesterday I went to the cinema.
4. My sister was helping my Mum about the house.
5. When she was doing her room. my friend came to my place.
6. He wanted to play chess with me.
7. My sister told him that I had gone to the cinema.
8.I called him in the evening.

I do lessons - не очень. И время должно быть продолженное. Вроде правильнее Now I`m doing my homework.

In the Evening I have called to it. - в данном случае не надо перфект ( и he вместо it).

My sister said that I had gone in the cinema. - тут тоже вроде лучше past indefinite в обоих частях предложения.

За подробностями на мыло.

I am a student 10 class.
Now I do lessons.
Yesterday I walked in the cinema.
My sister helped a mother.
When it did a room, my friend called.
He wanted to play with me in a chess.
My sister said that I had gone in the cinema.
In the evening I called him

100% на верность не даю