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Presently at young people there are a lot of interests and an essence of creation of certain subcultures this association of people with common interests. Very well when teenagers unite in harmless subcultures for society and teenagers.
Subcultures presently much the most popular and known it is Gotha, punks, EMO, hackers, bikers, hippie and others. I am not the member of any subculture. But if I could create subculture that likely it would be such: first the main goal of this group would be promotion of a healthy lifestyle the prohibition drugs of cigarettes of alcohol. Secondly sports as that my subculture that are volleyball and probably dances. In the third clothes usual and main thing convenient and bright flowers. music any except hard rock. In the fourth volunteering. Here so I see the ideal subculture

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