правильно я написала текст?

Question

London is the capital of Great Britain. More than six million people live in London. London lies on both banks of the river Thames. It is the largest city in Europe and one of the largest cities in the world. 
London is not only the capital of the country, it is also a very big port, one of the government of Great Britain. 
The most important parts of London are: the city, the west end, the East End and Westminster. 
 
The West End is the richest part of London. You can find the best shops, theatres, cinemas, museums, fine parks and squares there. The rich people live in the West End. The East End is the part of London where working people live. 
 
Westminster Abbey is one of the most beautiful buildings in London. There are many monuments of great men there. Many great English scientists lie buried there. Among them Newton, Darwin, Watt.

Наташка · Accepted Answer

* London is located on both banks of the river Thames 
* London is not only the capital of the country, it is also a very big port, one of the main ports in Great Britain. 
* Rich people live in the West End. 
* The East End is the part of London where common people live. 
* Many great English scientists are buried there. Newton, Darwin, Watt are among them

Сергей · Answer

правильно списали, так будет точнее сказать

Анастасия Айрон · Answer

NO!!! надо писать по РУССКИ

Санжар Сагындык · Answer

Newton, Darwin, Watt are among them. 
one of the government of Great Britain - не поняла смысл этой фразы.