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Through music, we open our new habits, sometimes they are positive and sometimes negative. Many millennium music inspired great "minds" of the world and contributed to the development of art. In the difficult moments of our lives music is for us, "antidepressants" and a means of boredom. But there's also her and negative qualities. Very often, it can distract us from the more important things and cause ssor.Takzhe is also the cause of misunderstanding adults and children. After all, parents often do not understand our tastes, and showing that we do not have to listen to that, or any other music.