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Dear Ben.

I think you should stay with your parents, because you too young for this travel. I think you can cheerfully spend this vacation, and I even tried to make for you the plan of action while your friends not to return and that you didn't miss on summer vacations.

In June you can go the grandmother in New York, I heard it the excellent city, in it there are many entertainments. In July ask for parents to go to travel with tents, it is very interesting and fascinating. And in August already to return your friends and you can spend time with them. I hope helped you with it not a simple question, and you will spend the summer vacations very cheerfully.

Write back soon!

With respect,

Andrey

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Baba.nina Pixto · Accepted Answer

Dear Ben, I think you should stay with your parents, because you too young for this trip. I think you can spend your vacation with fun, and I even made some plan of activity for you until your friends will return. So you will not feel lonely. 
 
In June you can visit your grandmother in New York, I heard it is excellent city, and there is many entertainment there. 
In July you with your parents can go camping. I think it will be exciting to spend some time on the nature. 
And in August your friends will be back and you will be able to spend time with them. I hope I helped you with this complex issue and you will manage to spend your vacation fun and enjoyable 
 
Waiting for a reply! 
 
Best wishes! 
 
 Andrew

Юлия Козулина · Answer

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