Английский: посмотрите, правильно ли составлены предложения?

Question

1. Any of the raw data is not precise.2. None of the pay rise will be provided. (т. е. не предусмотрено) 3. She made many strenuous exercices for her hips.4. Either door opens outward.5. They have two children. Either of the boys is unruly.6. She pals up with neither man.7. I have an affinity to drawing and half the spare time I devote to it.8. Either of their daughters can deliver great results in studies.9. Only half the issues were considered at the meeting.10. Some of the shipment has already been delivered.

Котёнок · Accepted Answer

1. The data is not accurate.
2. There will be no pay raise 
3. She made a lot of strenuous exercise(s) for her hips. 
4. Both doors open outwards. Push either.
5. They have two children. Both boys are unruly.
6. She pals up with neither man.
7. I like (have an affinity for) drawing and half of my the spare time I devote to it.
8. Both daughters can deliver (show) great results in studies.
9. Only half of the issues were considered/discussed at the meeting.
10. Part of the shipment has already been delivered. 
Хотя c shipment как-то не очень.