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Moscow, 
 Russia 
October, 23, 2012 
 Dear Ann, 
Thanks a lot for your last letter. I’m sorry I have not answered earlier, but I was really busy in my school. 
 I very seldom argue with the parents only in extreme cases. Yes, of course I spend a lot of time with my friends. Usually we go to the cinema, we walking in a park. Especially we like to go on shish kebabs in the summer. My parents like as I spend time with my friends. They have no anything against. And what about you? How is your relation with the sister? Do you often her to take away from kindergarten, when you parent’s can’t? Do you love her very much? 
 Well, I have letter go now to do my homework. Write back soon. 
 With the best wishes. Kristina.

1973-vadim-1 · Accepted Answer

Moscow, 
Russia 
October, 23, 2012 
Dear Ann, 
Thanks a lot for your last letter. I’m sorry I haven't had a chance to answer earlier, because I was really busy at my school. 
I very rarely argue with my parents and only in extreme cases. Yes, of course I spend a lot of time with my friends. Usually we go to the cinema, we take walks in a park. In summer we like to go out to eat, shish kebab is my favorite. My parents like it because I spend time with my friends. They don't have anything against it. And what about you? How is your relation with your sister? Do you often pick her up from kindergarten, when you parent’s can’t? Do you love her very much? 
Well, I have to go now to do my homework. Write back soon. Best wishes. Kristina.

Ирина Хазова · Answer

Dear Ann, 
 
thanks a lot for your last letter. I’m sorry I did not answer earlier, 
but I was really busy in my school. I argue with my parents very seldom, 
and only in extreme cases. Of course, I spend a lot of time with my friends. 
Usually we go to the cinema and walk in a park. Especially we like to go 
to shish (???) kebabs in summer. My parents are glad if I spend time with 
my friends. They have nothing against that. 
And what about you? How is your relation with your sister? Do you often take 
her home from the kindergarden in case that your parents cannot do it? 
Do you love her very much? 
Well, I finish writing my letter and go to do my homework. 
Please write back soon! 
 
With best wishes, 
Kristina.