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Елена Бобринева

Нужно проверить текст на английском, ошибки или что-то исправить.

I attend a secondary school for boys and girls. We have many sections such as basketball, soccer, volleyball, wrestling, chess and others. All classes have a modern electronic boards and computers. The school has a large library that contains a lot of different books. Also, there are computer classes. All the teachers are kind and good teaching children. We have a close-knit classmates. At recess I'm with friends to play ping-pong. After the lessons we have additional training in subjects. But in our school, I do not like the toilets. I would like to improve the food in the dining room.

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Наталья *******

Какая то школа на антидепрессантах! но надо же человеку помочь.
Вот вариант с правкой. Чисто правка грамматике, насчет смыла промолчу.
ошибки выделила как могла на ipad, обратите внимание на артикли в новом варианте. если вы сами это все писали то молодец!
I study at a secondary school for boys and girls. We have many sections such as basketball, soccer, volleyball, wrestling, chess and others. All classes have ...modern electronic boards and computers. The school has a large library that contains a lot of different books. Also, there are computer classes. All ...teachers are kind and good AT teaching children. I have great classmates. At recesses, my friends and I play ping-pong. After the lessons we have additional training in school subjects. The only thing I do not like about my school is the toilets. Аlso, I would like to improve the food in the school cafeteria (canteen).

НБ
Николай Биркин

действительно пипец)))

ЛС
Лена Семичева

I attend/ go to/ a student at a secondary school for boys and girls.
We have several/quite a few sports classes/groups such as basketball, soccer, volleyball, wrestling, chess and other.
All classes at our school have/are equipped with a modern electronic boards and computers.
Our school has a large/extensive library that contains a lot of books. Also, there are computer classes.
All the teachers are kind and good at teaching.
We are very close-knit as a class.
At recesses my friends and I play ping-pong.
After classes we have extra hours of certain subjects.
What I don't like at our school is the toilets.
Also, I would like to improve the food at our school canteen.

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