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My family is not large. I live with my mother
and brother. I also have a sister. She now lives in Moscow, she was married. I
am a study at the university of technology and design, the profession fashion
design in group 3-BT-5. My mom works for a large clothing company. In the
future, I plan to work with my mom. I'm interested in photographing, drawing
and Adobe Photoshop. My sister is a photographer, I help her to edit photos. I
am interested in fashion, not as aesthetically pleasing as well as a way of
expression. Clothing for me is like a painting for the artist.

Антон · Accepted Answer

My family is not large. I live with my mother and brother. I also have a sister. 
She lives now in Moscow, she was married. I am a student at the university of 
technology and design, the profession fashion design, in group 3-BT-5. 
My mom works for a big clothing company. In the future, I plan to work with my mom. 
I'm interested in photographing, drawing and Adobe Photoshop. My sister is a 
photographer, I help her to edit photos. I am interested in fashion, not as aesthetical 
pleasing only, but as well as a way of expression. Clothing for me is like painting for an artist.

Евгений · Answer

She lives in Moscow now. I interested in fashion. Вообще, рассказ коряво написан.

Dima · Answer

I don't come from a large family, I live with my mother and brother, but I also have a sister, who is married and lives in Moscow. I study fashion design at the University of technology and design (in group 3-BT-5). My mom works for a large clothing company. I plan to work with my mom in a future. I'm interested in photography and I also like to draw. My sister is the photographer and I like helping her edit photos in the Adobe Photoshop.