Правильно ли я написала? =)))

My brother Oscar and his family live in Manchester. Manchester is a city in England. In this city known plays soccer team Manchester. A week later I fly to Manchester to visit mah football Manchester United FC Sumy. My brother is going to show me your city and I think we will visit several pubs taste several beers. My favorite beer Porter. And Oscar likes beer with vodka. I'm sure forgot something, but that's not important right now, because I always try to be optimistic. If, after football, we will have free time we will go to the shop and buy souvenirs. Проверьте пожалуйста))))) ) Буду благодарна))))