Кто говорит по английски? Проверьте текст пожалуйста...=)

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Кто говорит по английски? Проверьте текст пожалуйста...=)

Let me introdus my self, my name is Tania. I`m 16 years old. I live in Kiev. Kiev is a beautiful city and the capital of Ukraine. I very like this city, it`s beautiful in all seasons, but mostly I like in spring. I`m a pupil of the 10th form at school № 231. Usually a have six or seven lessons a day. I`m good at Ukrainian literature, Chemistry and English language, and my favorite subjects are Ukrainian and English languages, Foreign literature. Also I have extra classes in Mathematics and English language. And like the most of teenagers, I don`t like doing my homework, but I have to. My home isn`t far from my school. I have a big family. I live with my parents, grandparents and my great-grandmother. We have a good time together, especially weekends and holidays. Also we have a nice little dog, sometimes I walking it. Every summer I and my parents go to Black sea to have rest. I have many friends and acquaintances, but just some of them I can consider my close friends. With some of them I study in the same form and live in the same courtyard. We walk together and have a good time. Usually we go to the cinema, roller-skating or just walking. Also in summer we went to the summer camps. I appreciate my friends, we help each other in our problems. I`m fond of skiing. I I recently learned how to ski, and I like. This winter, I and my dad went to the Carpathian Mountains to ski. Usually we skiing in Protasov Yar in Kiev. I really liked to ski in the Carpathians. Also, I`m fond of handmade. . I make trinkets and baubles of polymer clay (or termo plastic). It is look like a plasticine or ordinary clay, but at the high temperature, it become hardens. I can make beautiful earrings, bracelets, necklaces, rings, there are good gifts for a birthday or other holiday. I've been doing this in my spare time, I am a creative person and I think I`m good at it. My favorite styles of music are alternative, rock and their varieties. My favorite groups are Simple Plane, Skillet, Three Days Grace and 3 Doors Down. My favorite film genres such as thrillers, comedies, horror, drama. My favorite movies are Interstate 60, Requiem for a Dream, Mirrors and youth comedy. Also I like to read books. Recently I started paying attention to psychology. I read a few books about human emotions and human psychology. Now I read a book of Brazilian psychotherapist and scholar Augusto Curi "Seller of Dreams". In my spare time I usually go out with friends, but when the weather is bed I prefer listen to music or read.

Елена

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28.01.2010

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Answer 1 · 2010-01-20 20:17:36

Let me introduCE myself, my name is TanYA. I`m 16 years old. I live in Kiev. Kiev is A beautiful city and IT'S the capital of (THE) Ukraine. I like this city VERY MUCH. IT'S BEAUTIFUL in all seasons, but I like IT MOSTLY in spring.
I`m a pupil of the 10th form OF school № 231. Usually a have six or seven lessons a day. I`m good at THEUkrainian literature, Chemistry and THE English language, and my favorite subjects are THE Ukrainian and THE English languages, Foreign literature. Also I have OPTIONAL classes in Mathematics and THE English language (=ENGLISH). And like -- most of teenagers, I don`t like doing my homework, but I have to DO IT. My home isn`t far from my school.
I have a big family. I live with my parents, grandparents and my great-grandmother. We have a good time together, especially AT weekends and ON holidays. Also we have a nice little dog, sometimes I GO FOR A WALK WITH it. Every summer my parents AND I go to THE Black sea to have A rest.
I have many friends and acquaintances, but I can consider my close friends ONLY SOME OF THEM. I study in the same form and live in the same courtyard WITH SOME OF THEM. We walk together and have a good time. Usually we go to the cinema, roller-skatE or just walking (GO FOR A WALK). We ALSO went to summer camps IN SUMMER. I appreciate my friends, we help each other TO SOLVE OUR problems.
I`m fond of skiing. I HAVE Recently learned to ski, and I like DOING IT (=IT). MY dad AND ME went to the Carpathian Mountains to ski THIS WINTER. Usually we SKI in (THE) Protasov Yar in Kiev. I really liked to ski in the Carpathians.
Also, I`m fond of handmade. . I make trinkets and baubles of polymer clay (or termo plastic). It -- lookS like a plasticine or ordinary clay, but at the high temperature, it becomeS hardenER (IT HARDENS).
I can make beautiful earrings, bracelets, necklaces, rings, WHICH are good gifts for a birthday or other holiday. I DO this in my spare time, I am a creative person and I think I`m good at it.
My favorite styles of music are alternative, rock and their varieties. My favorite groups are Simple Plane, Skillet, Three Days Grace and 3 Doors Down.
My favorite film genres ARE thrillers, comedies, horror, AND drama. My favorite movies are Interstate 60, Requiem for a Dream, Mirrors and youth comedy.
Also I like to read books. I HAVE RECENTLY started paying attention to psychology. I HAVE READ a few books about human emotions and human psychology. Now I AM READING a book of AN Brazilian psychotherapist and scholar Augusto Curi "Seller of Dreams".
In my spare time I usually go out with friends, but when the weather is BAD I prefer LSTENING to music or READING.

PS Не уверена, что "схватила" все ошибки, но читать ещё раз - без вариантов: так МНОГО писать нельзя!: -)

Olga Prianichnicova

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Answer 2 · 2010-01-19 20:47:33

боже... такое впечатление, что через переводчик переводили текст... ужас!
надо время, чтобы все исправить....

Марина Наумова

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19.01.2010

Answer 3 · 2010-01-19 20:50:48

на все надо уйму времени. которого, наверное, ни у кого тут нет. хотя, я могу и ошибаться. для начала:

Let me introduСE myself, my name is TanYa. I`m 16 years old. I live in Kiev. Kiev is THE beautiful city and the capital of Ukraine. I LIKE THIS CITY VERY MUCH, it`s beautiful in all seasons, but I LIKE IT IN SPRING MORE.

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